I Woke Up
- Thomas Redoubt

- 23 hours ago
- 2 min read
by Thomas Redoubt
. . . this morning in the same body
I went to sleep in last night.
I am sure it was the same body

because it had on
the same pajamas I put on
every night before going to bed.
But it doesn't feel like it
fits as well as it did before.
Some parts are sagging,
especially under my eyes and chin
and on my arms and chest and rear end.
Other parts are just too tight,
like around my waist
and thighs and ankles.
And it doesn't respond
as quickly as it used to.
I tell it to do something,
like sit up and get out of bed,
and it just lies there.
And when I can finally
get it to do what I tell it,
it doesn't work as well, either.
It slowly goes
from one position to another,
from one place to another,
from one thing to another at its own speed
regardless of how fast I tell it to go.
And just about everything
is too heavy for it to lift now!
And pain!
This body never used give me any pain!
Now, just about every part of it
complains every time I tell it
to move or do something.
The body I remember
having last night
before going to bed
was lean and taut,
fast and quick,
smooth and strong,
just about as good a body
as anybody has ever had.
Now look at me!
You'd think I got old or something!
And all I did
was close my eyes for a little while!
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Thomas Redoubt is from Freedom, Pennsylvania, a small town on the Ohio River north-west of Pittsburgh and now lives in Allison Park, Pennsylvania. He was trained in science and law spent the first half of his non-literary career as a materials science researcher and the second half as a lawyer and law school adjunct professor. Redoubt has a passion for writing poetry and sees poetry as the epitome of one person to communicate his/her thoughts and feelings to another.




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